Replanning Vinca stuff…
Posted in Vinca and tagged with Vinca on 11/09/2008 11:53 am by DejiSo, I’m still pretty Vinca-centered lately.
But before speaking of that, Suppi and I did quite well in our Comic with photos thing… besides the fact we’re incredible slow workers and we’re impossibly out of schedule and almost overdue xD;
We did awful on the marketing test, due overconfidence and not memorizing part of the stuff…. oh well 9_9: It was a 2-people test and even with that we did awful! We suck xD;
Now, back to Vinca, I showed my BB roughs to my Comic Workshop teacher and he really liked them! He wants now to keep an eye on my progress and show that to him every class along with my normal homework xD; That’ll help me working more seriously on it.
He pointed out I should fix some panels that were boring or too small for what they needed to be, so I did that yesterday. he also pointed out my ending sucked and that I needed something better and more cliffhanger-y in a way, so people would be interested in reading whatever comic I’d draw next about Vinca. I’m… pretty much blank. My friend Dure tried to help me last night with some ideas, so Ill see what I can do. Man, I suck at writing interesting stuff xD;
Now, once I’m done with the BB I have to get in a battle or make a BB to get Vinca into the White Jackets. I was so excited when Luniara contacted me some time ago! But I was already working on this uber long BB and there was no room on it to insert a WJ part. Dure suggests me to challenge a WJ and get to birds killed with the same stone, but I think I’ll do better with a BB that people won’t complain about for not having action scenes in it ^^; (people on Void tend to hat talky/story battles, while not hating the BBs that cover that area…) Oh well, I’ll see what I can do about that later. I also have some problems with Will’s relatonship with Vinca, since it’ll be harder to handle than I expected xD;
In the meantime, I absolutely hate the random character sheet I threw together for Vinca wearing the White Jacket, so I’m redrawing it… someday soon… Probably after the BB is done, so I won’t give myself more room for procrastination Xox
BTW, I finished page two of the BB last night, but… I won’t be uploading anymore of it here until I get at least half of the whole thing done! Btw, checking my old battles and stuff, I… miss my old inking style xD; But I’m so focused on the coloring now and I hate inking so much now since I lost my precious Copic multiliners, my inking got plain and boring. Maybe I’ll retouch my inking after I’m done with coloring everything… Now the bad thing is that It’s taking me 3-4 days to finish each page (because I don’t work on the everyday) and people will get the false impression I can make stuff like that whenever I want! Which is not true because it takes me forever and a day because i’m a lazy bastard!
2 pages finished, 21 pages to go + the cover! *kills self*
Now, I’ll leave you with old WJ character sheet
and with a random doodle I did last night of Vinca wearing the WJ.










November 9th, 2008 at 2:27 pm
Wah, I just love that new outfit of Vinca’s! I think that’s my favorite outfit you’ve drawn her in! The colors, the jacket, the things on her arms and legs-just everything looks so cool. xD
And I don’t know what you’re saying about your inking, the inking on the page you uploaded looks great! :U
But at least you’re getting some advice for the comic, I’m sure it’ll be even more epic! Good luck~
November 10th, 2008 at 4:12 am
What’s a BB? XD I’ve been wondering for some time now ^^; Oh and what’s a WJ?
Ooooh I love this new outfit. :3 I really like the socks and arm warmers. But my favorite part is the skirt and belt combination. So awesome looking :] That shadow is so cool as well. It’s looks sludgy but is transparent.
8D Go Deji, draw more pretty thingsssssssss <3
November 10th, 2008 at 8:37 am
Go deji go! XD
La verdad a mi me gustaba el design sheet de WJ Vinca XD que es lo que no te gusta de el particularmente? Yo tengo que rehacer el de Anya, solo espero que me salga la mitad de bien :/
November 10th, 2008 at 11:08 am
@Tenna: I quite like that outfit too, but the colors are not exactly the ones I like the most… I had to adjust them to match the red on the jacket xD;
About the inking, the boring part is that it now has no width variation at all xD; it’s just a plain boring lineart with a uniform width line Dx; That’s only because I’m a lazy inker and I hate inking xD;
@Black-spiral: BB = Beyond Battle, it’s a comic for enterVOID where you basically don’t fight with anybody and you do whatever you want xD; and WJ= abreviation for White Jackets =P
Glad you like the outfit too! It seems it was a good choice, lol.
@Dure: odio la pose! xD me carga como se ve, jaja, así q la voy a redibujar. Ya la tgo boceteada en el pc =3 Y nbo te preocupes, a de Anya te va a quedar bien =3 Esta e tomó con suerte un par de horas, entre bocetearla, calcarla con la caja de luz y pintarla XP